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Chapter Eight

Thursday

Art Delgado lived where he had always lived, in a single-storey house on a hill street in Eagle Rock, with a lemon tree in the front yard, an old Buick in the drive and a flagpole he had put up himself in 1991. The flag was at half-mast. Thorsen suspected it had been at half-mast for longer than a week.

He parked the van on the street and sat a moment. Then he took the duffel, because you do not turn up at a man’s house for the night without a bag, and went up the path.

Delgado had the door open before he reached it.

“I made chilli. Don’t get excited, it’s from a recipe on the can.”


Carol Delgado had died three years ago. Thorsen had heard about it late and third-hand, the way he heard everything. The house still had her in it. Her plates on the dresser, her reading chair with the lamp angled over it, a row of African violets on the kitchen windowsill that Art was keeping alive out of what looked like pure stubbornness. He moved round the kitchen like a man who had learned the route late and did not trust it.

They ate at the table. The chilli was not good and Thorsen had two bowls. Afterwards Delgado brought out the bottle he had been saving, and it turned out to be the real thing, eighteen years old, with a wax seal he broke with his thumbnail.

“Carol’s brother gave me that when I made lieutenant. I said I’d open it when I retired. Then I said when the Dodgers won. Then I ran out of reasons.” He poured two inches each. “To Ray.”

“To Ray.”

It went down like a warm hand.

For an hour it was the old stories. Art’s boyhood in Glendale, and the retired sergeants he still drank with at the VFW on Colorado. The elevator in Parker Center. The time Ray made a suspect wait forty minutes in an interview room while he finished alphabetising the witness statements, and the man confessed out of boredom. The Christmas a rookie backed a black-and-white into Delgado’s own car and Ray wrote it up in the style of a homicide report, with a diagram. Delgado laughed until he had to take his glasses off. For that hour Thorsen was thirty-eight again and had a desk.

Then the bottle was a third down and the room had gone quiet, and Delgado was turning his glass on the arm of his chair.

“You going to tell me where you’ve been all day, or do I have to guess?”

“Frogtown.”

The glass stopped.

“Ah, Danny.”

“He was working it, Art. Reyes. He went to the mother three times. He had mud on his boots from somewhere and a pry bar in the van and her name on a napkin in the glovebox. And every time he went near that family there was a silver Tahoe sitting down the street. Same truck was outside his house yesterday. Same outfit came to my motel last night with a stun gun.” He showed the forearm. “Castellan Risk Group. Curtis Vane.”

Delgado looked at the burns for a long time. His face did something complicated. It settled, in the end, on tired.

“Who ran that for you?”

“The detective who caught Ray. Brooks.”

“Imani Brooks. Good. She’s good.” He nodded slowly. “She’s pulling the old book too, I suppose.”

“Tomorrow.”

“Sure. I would.” He rubbed his eyes under the glasses. “All right. Let me take some of the air out of this, because you’ve had six years by yourself to get good at seeing things, and I don’t want you seeing the wrong one.”

He held up a thick finger.

“Castellan. The League keeps them on retainer. Has done for years. An officer dies, active or retired, they put a car on the house for a couple of weeks. You know why. Burglars read the obituaries. Reporters. Crazies. It’s a courtesy, it’s in the benefits booklet, I’ve got one on me when I go. I made the call for Denise myself the morning after. So that’s your Tahoe.”

“He told me he was a neighbour. He went along with a dog that doesn’t exist.”

“He’s a rent-a-cop with a gym membership. They’re not hired for their conversation.”

“And the motel?”

“That I don’t like.” Delgado said it flatly, and Thorsen believed him. “That’s somebody getting ahead of himself. You were seen in her yard at eight in the morning looking through a window, Danny. Looking like that. Somebody decided the widow needed protecting from a drifter and did it stupid. I’ll make a call. I’ll make it loud.”

“And following Ray to Frogtown? A month before there was any widow?”

A second finger came up, more slowly.

“That one I can’t tell you, because I don’t know. But I’ll tell you what I’d guess. Vane’s shop does background for half the city. He was Metro on the Ochoa thing, you’re right, I remember. If a retired detective starts knocking on doors on a closed case with Vane’s name in the file, and that gets back to Vane, does he put a car on it to find out what’s being said about him? Yes. I would. It’s not nice. It’s not a crime.”

It was reasonable. All of it. Each piece taken out and laid on the table had an ordinary shape. That was what a good lieutenant did. He had done it to Thorsen for eleven years, usually when Thorsen was right.

“Then why was Ray working it?” Thorsen said. “He told me to leave it. He stood in the doorway with his coat on and told me it was done. What changed?”

Delgado did not answer straight away. He got up. He went to the window and looked out at the flagpole, a shrunken man in a cardigan with his hands in the pockets.

“You never saw the closure, did you,” he said. “The paper.”

“I was gone before it went through.”

“You were on comp days. I sent you.” He nodded at the glass. “I’ve thought about that, since. Whether I sent you so you’d cool off, or so you wouldn’t be in the room.”

“Art.”

“You’ve spent six years thinking the tenth floor closed that case. A captain. A commander. Some name on a line you never had to look at, so you could hate the building.” He turned round. His eyes were wet again, but his voice was level. “It doesn’t work like that. You know it doesn’t. A homicide gets cleared by the investigating officer. He writes the follow-up, he states the grounds, he signs. Then his lieutenant approves it. That’s the only way the box gets ticked.”

The room was very quiet. Somewhere in the house a clock was going.

“I approved it,” Delgado said. “That’s my name on the second line and I’ll carry it. But I didn’t write it, Danny. It came to me finished. Four pages, no corrections. He brought it into my office on the Thursday while you were supposed to be fishing, and he put it on my desk, and he wouldn’t sit down.”

“No.”

“He was lead. It was his to close.”

“No. He’d have told me.”

“Would he?” Delgado asked it gently. “He didn’t argue with you. That whole week. Eleven years I listened to the two of you fight about parking, and on that one he didn’t say a word. You noticed. I know you noticed, you noticed everything. You just filed it under something you could live with.”

Thorsen had the glass in his hand. He put it down on the table, carefully, because he was not sure what the hand would do otherwise.

“Why?”

“I asked him. He said the evidence supported it. He said it to the wall behind my head.” Delgado came back and lowered himself into the chair like a man twice his weight. “I don’t know why. I swear to you. I’ve had six years on it too. Maybe somebody leaned. Maybe he just wanted it over. Maybe he looked at what that fight would cost and he had a kid just out of the academy and he did the sum.” He spread his hands. “But there’s your answer to what changed. Nothing changed. He closed a case he didn’t believe in, and his partner walked out on him for it without ever knowing, and then his boy died, and he was alone in that garage with a pegboard and a lot of time. So he went back. He stood on that woman’s stairs with his hat in his hand. He was trying to get square.”

“And then?”

“And then he couldn’t.” Delgado’s voice finally cracked. “That’s all. That’s the whole terrible thing. There’s no Tahoe in it. There’s a man who did one wrong thing and couldn’t put it down. Brooks got it right. I wish to God she hadn’t.”


The spare room had a single bed with a candlewick cover and a shelf of Carol’s paperbacks. Thorsen lay on top of the cover in his clothes with his boots on the floor and his feet over the end.

The house ticked and settled. Down the hall, a long time later, he heard Delgado on the telephone, low, the words lost, the tone of a man making something loud as promised. Then the click of a lamp.

He went back through it. Not the garage this time. The squad room.

Ray at the other desk, six years ago, the last week. Ray not eating. Ray taking a call on his mobile and walking out to the stairwell to finish it, which he had never done in his life. Ray with his coat on.

It’s done, Danny. Leave it done.

Not they’ve closed it. Not it’s been taken off us.

He had heard the sentence a thousand times since. He had never once heard who was speaking.

Four pages, Delgado said. No corrections.

Ray Okafor typed with two fingers. It took him an hour to do a page. He never got a date wrong.

He would have sat at that desk for half a day, six feet from Thorsen’s empty chair, hitting one key at a time.

Keys: ← → change chapter, B bookmark, C contents.